I'll be straightforward and saying that this series didn't excite me initially... but I'm kind of a lurker so I give episodic content a chance :)
There were a lot of things done right about this installment. I'll outline the things that I enjoyed most out of this episode, and inversely what I think held the content back:
PRO:
-Character development. I really felt like you pushed the envelope here and truly, honestly connected the characters with the audience. This surprised me greatly knowing beforehand that the episode was centered on Nylocke! Specifically, the concepts of questioning one's self worth, the desire to be someone else (or perhaps, who one truly is?), and discovering the true colors of someone else really made me care about the characters in a way unlike any of the previous TOME episodes... you did something different here and I just can't say it in words beyond this.
-The animation is well-placed. There wasn't a single frame of animation that I felt was wasted or not used to its fullest capacity. I also see that the wear and tear you've been putting on your wrists to draw all this stuff out; it shows the experience you've earned as an artist.
-I always appreciate good voice acting. Daring to do a musical number as well, that stuff is harder to do than people give artists credit for.
CON:
-The music felt as if it was overbearing on the vocals concerning frequencies in some areas. The series would really benefit from an added EQ pass in the future so that the character vocals always feel distinctly separate from the music tracks used. This is especially true of Kirbopher's vocals; his frequency was lower.
-Some parts are drawn out. The dialogue could have been cut down and had the same or increased entertainment value, even knowing Nylocke's tendency to really... REALLY overdo his monologues.
I look forward to whats in store for this series. I know there are other series that have similar concepts/settings out there... but this is an indie show, and indie content creators deserve respect! :)
Now I know what's been keeping you busy all this time! Heh!