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*smack head* Its so ridiculous!!! I love it!

Thanks for the laugh! Beyblade was so dumb! :)

-Loved the visuals. You obviously have a lot of fancy tools at your disposal

-Hated the animation. It lags so far behind the visuals that it is jarring.

This one was alright. I think the effort put into the frames could have been distributed differently to allow for more impact with less work required. There's also some frames that seem like they were just placed in there for no reason.

Example: The shot at 0:20 feels very out of place and it doesn't add anything to the piece as a whole; there is no transition into the camera pan. If you wanted to get some camera panning for an impressive/introductory effect, it really should have transitioned from the shot at 0:15 or 0:17 rather than cutting. The previous piece you uploaded had similar issues and I would suggest really focusing on figuring out how to do more with less.

Also, something to be careful of: where the average viewer's attention will likely fall on the image. In many cases, you want to try to guide the viewer's attention to some point on the screen without them having to refocus themselves and miss out on what may have been intended to be the center of attention. Overall it was okay in this short, but there were a few rough spots like the transition to the rollercoaster part (which I liked). You have the power to control what people look at specifically at the screen through color theory; use it!

I hope you find this helpful, I have deep respect for your talents and I am eager to see how they evolve over time.

....and then he eats the vegetables...

Suggestion: Watch the music volume when you're combining it with dialogue. The music seemed to overtake the vocals in some areas.

So freaking true...

Respect!

Thoroughly entertaining, was really cool when you started thinning the line between the program used to animate and the animation itself.

Looks like santa is going to HO! HO! HELL.

chluaid responds:

to Hell in a sleigh drawn by evil reindeer silhouette clones!

I didn't feel the suspense if that was the goal. The vignette borders were good, just the camerawork could have been better. Some dirt/detail could have been used on the walls and decor to make the atmosphere more intimidating.

TaraGraphika responds:

The goal was...to feel creepy...I'm very lame at 3D, it's my first time...sort of experimental. I'll try to add more texture detail next time. Thank you very much:)

Hello. I also like looking at illuminated screens as well as pressing buttons. We have a lot in common!

Ryan Roye @Tanadrine-Studios

Age 40

Animator

Tanadrine Studios

Joined on 12/31/06

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