I am a big fan of Toonwerks; top notch content and another very entertaining episode. I would seriously recommend that down the road you put this content onto a DVD and sell it with extras or something.
I am a big fan of Toonwerks; top notch content and another very entertaining episode. I would seriously recommend that down the road you put this content onto a DVD and sell it with extras or something.
Extremely high quality animation. I can't think of a single thing that could have been done to improve it. Immersive, masterfully drawn and animated.
Though the animation/art felt weak, the little extras you put in there were actually pretty good. The sketches in particular were cool to look at. I think your inclusion of "extras" is an excellent idea.
My action scripting skills were very rusty but the extras made it extra special. Looking back, I actually spent more time on the menu than on the animation :]
Zeebra
The video doesn't do the music justice. In contrast to my rating, I do think this would make a great, brief segment of an expanded music video.
Its for a monthly animation contest where you make short animated clips. I agree on the music, its a great track.
I liked this one a lot, i'm willing to bet the idea could easily be expanded upon.
On pacing, I think it is excellent. Cut out the boring "anime-cliche" panoramas and slideshows and just show us the good stuff. That's what this short does.
Suggestion: The female vocalist's clips sounded a little soft compared to everything else, if you do an update, balance that audio out!
I shall. Thanks :>.
The animation and graphics are good... no argument there.
The reason for 2 stars is that stick figure fight animations are so cliche and overused. There are *millions* of these out there... there needs to be some substance or innovation aside from copying *verbatim* styles you see on videogames.
To really make these stick figure anims more than just a "one and done" forgettable compilation, my suggestion is to try developing a new, original fighting style or incorporating more clever and interesting choreography. It will separate you from the crowd.
Hello. I also like looking at illuminated screens as well as pressing buttons. We have a lot in common!
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Tanadrine Studios
Joined on 12/31/06