Jewel encrusted words... it can work, just thinking they have to be roughly the same size (aside from the 'D') The 'L' could be more of a longer shoe and not so high-heeled.
Maybe alien calligraphy (2D) using all the same elements might be more aesthetically pleasing?
Mabelma
The colors are nice but I think the design is a little bit messy. Maybe just go back to pencil and paper and try to sketch it out first, go for something simple but readable then add all the little effects and what nots. Best of luck with it :)
Tanadrine-Studios
I'm going to try to salvage this design first... see if I can't fill it out and make it less chaotic. If it comes to the very worst, it'll be back to the pencil/paper... or a delay in the title redesign.